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 <big><big>Learn to thrive with enemies at your gate. Take the fights you want, and leave the ones you don't want.</big></big>
-By using [[Faction Warfare |Faction Warfare]] mechanics, you have ample opportunity to learn small ship & small gang PVP in an environment without High Sec's restrictions or Null Sec's warp bubbles and larger scale PVP.
+Using [[Faction Warfare |Faction Warfare]] mechanics, you have ample opportunity to learn small ship & small gang PVP in an environment without High Sec's restrictions or Null Sec's warp bubbles and larger scale PVP.
-As well, by being in low, you will learn to evaluate danger, impact from game mechanics, and gather piloting experience and mitigation techniques to optimize your mental models for handling dangerous situations; fight, flight, or avoidance.  (Note--too wordy, need more iterations to make it plain language)
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+You will learn to evaluate danger, gather piloting experience, and develop your own methods of handling dangerous space; fight, flight, or mitigate.
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