Soft Drink Wars: Difference between revisions

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|Quafe ~~has been secretly developing a new soft drink called Quafe Unleashed that they say will revolutionize~~ the ~~entire~~ soft drink ~~industry. But only hours ago, the formula was stolen. Security records show that a Quafe employee, a guy called <pirate name>, has just left the station with the top-secret formula~~ in ~~his possession. Quafe representatives believe that he might be on his way to try to sell or deliver~~ the ~~formula~~ to ~~one of~~ Quafe's ~~competitors~~, and ~~have offered a reward for~~ the ~~recovery of the formula~~.

|I just received an emergency communication from an insider in the Quafe Corporation. Perhaps you've heard of them, the single biggest soft drink manufacturer in the galaxy? Thanks to Quafe's assistance in resolving the Girani-Fa incident, their presence and political clout within the Empire has grown tremendously.

We could make big points ~~with our Gallente friends~~ if we could find <pirate name> ~~first~~. We were able to track him for a while, and we've just heard that he's now in the ~~Brundakur~~ system. ~~I‘ll~~ upload the coordinates to your NeoCom. Stop him before he meets his contact, and bring back the formula.

Anyway, Quafe has been secretly developing a new soft drink called Quafe Unleashed that they say will revolutionize the entire soft drink industry. But only hours ago, the formula was stolen. Security records show that a Quafe employee, an Amarrian named <pirate name>, has just left the station with the top-secret formula in his possession. Quafe representatives believe that he might be on his way to try to sell or deliver the formula to one of Quafe's competitors, and have offered a reward for the recovery of the formula.

Now, the Amarr government has spoken out against this act of corporate terrorism, but so far they haven't taken any overt actions to deal with it. We could make big points if we could find <pirate name>. We were able to track him for a while, and we've just heard that he's now in the <system> system. I'll upload the coordinates to your NeoCom. Stop him before he meets his contact, and bring back the formula.

Oh, and make sure you keep this to yourself. Quafe doesn't want it to get out that this formula even exists.

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-|Quafe has been secretly developing a new soft drink called Quafe Unleashed that they say will revolutionize the entire soft drink industry. But only hours ago, the formula was stolen. Security records show that a Quafe employee, a guy called <pirate name>, has just left the station with the top-secret formula in his possession. Quafe representatives believe that he might be on his way to try to sell or deliver the formula to one of Quafe's competitors, and have offered a reward for the recovery of the formula.
+|I just received an emergency communication from an insider in the Quafe Corporation. Perhaps you've heard of them, the single biggest soft drink manufacturer in the galaxy? Thanks to Quafe's assistance in resolving the Girani-Fa incident, their presence and political clout within the Empire has grown tremendously.
-We could make big points with our Gallente friends if we could find <pirate name> first. We were able to track him for a while, and we've just heard that he's now in the Brundakur system. I‘ll upload the coordinates to your NeoCom. Stop him before he meets his contact, and bring back the formula.
+Anyway, Quafe has been secretly developing a new soft drink called Quafe Unleashed that they say will revolutionize the entire soft drink industry. But only hours ago, the formula was stolen. Security records show that a Quafe employee, an Amarrian named <pirate name>, has just left the station with the top-secret formula in his possession. Quafe representatives believe that he might be on his way to try to sell or deliver the formula to one of Quafe's competitors, and have offered a reward for the recovery of the formula.
+Now, the Amarr government has spoken out against this act of corporate terrorism, but so far they haven't taken any overt actions to deal with it. We could make big points if we could find <pirate name>. We were able to track him for a while, and we've just heard that he's now in the <system> system. I'll upload the coordinates to your NeoCom. Stop him before he meets his contact, and bring back the formula.
+Oh, and make sure you keep this to yourself. Quafe doesn't want it to get out that this formula even exists.
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