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[[User:Lillik eoner|Lillik eoner]] ([[User talk:Lillik eoner|talk]]) 00:13, 2 June 2014 (UTC) | [[User:Lillik eoner|Lillik eoner]] ([[User talk:Lillik eoner|talk]]) 00:13, 2 June 2014 (UTC) | ||
The article looks pretty great! About the only suggestion would be a tweak to the overview. Your narrative makes you sound a bit insecure about your authority on the subject which is contradictory to the inforamtion contained on the page. Hope that helps! | |||
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Add comments, suggestions, and complaints here. Lillik eoner (talk) 00:13, 2 June 2014 (UTC) The article looks pretty great! About the only suggestion would be a tweak to the overview. Your narrative makes you sound a bit insecure about your authority on the subject which is contradictory to the inforamtion contained on the page. Hope that helps!