Varius Arcturus' Overview Guide: Difference between revisions

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 = Introduction  =
-VA's Overview Guide is a step-by-step guide, designed to teach new players how to set up their own overviews in EVE Online.
+The Overview Guide is a step-by-step guide, designed to teach new players how to set up their own overviews in EVE Online.
 The guide contains a full walk-through of how to set up a complete overview from start to finish, with the following presets:
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-Setting up your overview is compulsory for uni fleets. People will get angry at you if you don't have your overview set up properly. Your overview presets are your eyes in EVE. Playing the game without setting them up properly is like not wearing glasses. You don't need glasses, you say? Trust me, everyone wears glasses in EVE. Knowledge is power. Even if you think you know it all, you don't.
+Setting up your overview is compulsory for uni fleets. It is very important to have your overview set up properly. Your overview presets are your eyes in Eve Online.
 = Getting Started  =