User:Jindo Lee/Applying to EVE University: Difference between revisions

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 <big>'''Staging'''</big>
-* '''[[Main_Community|Main Community]]''' - Our headquarters in Stacmon gives us easy access to highsec, lowsec, and nullsec space.
+* '''[[Main_Community|Main Community]]''' - Our Stacmon HQ gives you easy access to highsec, lowsec, and nullsec space.
-* '''[[Wormhole_Community|Wormhole Community]]''' - We have a persistent base of operations in wormhole space where our members can learn about wormhole life.
+* '''[[Wormhole_Community|Wormhole Community]]''' - Our persistent base of operations in wormhole space helps members learn about wormhole life.
-* '''[[EVE_University_Incursion_Community|Incursion Community]]''' - We have an established Incursion community that follows incursions around New Eden as wherever they happen.
+* '''[[EVE_University_Incursion_Community|Incursion Community]]''' - An established community that follows incursions around New Eden as they happen.
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