Talk:Lillik's Guide to (relatively) Safe Ice Harvesting: Difference between revisions

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 [[User:Lillik eoner|Lillik eoner]] ([[User talk:Lillik eoner|talk]]) 00:13, 2 June 2014 (UTC)
-The article looks pretty great!  About the only suggestion would be a tweak to the overview.  Your narrative makes you sound a bit insecure about your authority on the subject which is contradictory to the inforamtion contained on the page.  Hope that helps!
+*The article looks pretty great!  About the only suggestion would be a tweak to the overview.  Your narrative makes you sound a bit insecure about your authority on the subject which is contradictory to the inforamtion contained on the page.  Hope that helps!