User:Titus tallang/BLAP doctrine sandbox: Difference between revisions

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 This doctrine is usable in all areas of space. However, see the “weaknesses” section, and note that most nullsec alliances and all wormhole alliances can readily form fleets using ships in the “exactly like this, but better” category. Roaming in nullsec with this fairly slow doctrine therefore depends on your ability to anticipate hostile forces’ movement and pre-position your fleet to engage or disengage as it best suits you. However, since dictors cost about twice as much as your Vexors, you can trade fairly well just by hazing tackle. }}
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 {{quote|[[Image:Raido_Kudonen.jpg|36px|link=]] '''Raido Kudonen'''
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 Against kiting gangs, such as Orthruses/Navy Ospreys/Caracals, you should damp the enemy out to the point that they must either close to your engagement range or go away. You have no ability to force kiting gangs to fight and should not try.}}
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 {{quote|[[Image:Raido_Kudonen.jpg|36px|link=]] '''Raido Kudonen'''