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 Welcome to my page!   I will be keeping an ongoing log of things i'm working on in different sections.
-===How goes it ===
+===How Goes It ===
-"'''How goes it?'''"  This is my favorite greeting.  It allows you the greeted to express yourself in any direction you wish. <br>
+"'''How Goes It?'''"  This is my favorite greeting.  It allows you, the greeted, to express yourself in any direction you wish. <br>
-How you feel, the project frustrating you, the kill-mail that makes your blood boil <br>
+How you feel, a project thats frustrating you, the kill-mail that made your blood boil <br>
-as well as the longing for the next ship just ISK's away from flying.  don't hold back or filter...  I did ask.. How Goes it.
+as well as, longing for the next ship.. just ISK's away... from flying.  don't hold back or filter...  I did ask.. How Goes It.
 == E-Uni Epic Arc ==