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-== Typo ==
+== Typo  ==
-Minor typo to correct. "Scouting is the act of moving ahead of a fleet, providing intel as to the state of the next location, or following the fleet one jumb behind, to identify any pursuing targets." It should be "jump" not "jumb".
--Silvonus
+Minor typo to correct. "Scouting is the act of moving ahead of a fleet, providing intel as to the state of the next location, or following the fleet one jumb behind, to identify any pursuing targets." It should be "jump" not "jumb". -Silvonus
 ...Mining Ships
-This is any ship which has a''' bonusses''' related to mining, barring the cruiser class[17], such as:
+This is any ship which has a'''bonusses''' related to mining, barring the cruiser class[17], such as:
+Should be bonuses, word as-is is a German genitive singular form.
+-Hong Hu
+<br>
+== List Format  ==
+Current
+every chance we get, while still meeting the University's educational goals by teaching students how to fight hisec wars. To that end, the SOP is intended to:
+*Deny the enemy easy kills of helpless non-combat ships.
+*Deny the enemy easy kills of poorly-fitted ships.
+*Deny the enemy any kills of high-value ships that will look good on his killboard.
+*Deny the enemy any chance to banter or smack talk with us.
+*Deny the enemy any enjoyment from the conflict.
+Suggestion/Change to
+Deny the Enemy...
-Should be bonuses,  word as-is is a German genitive singular form.
+*...easy kills of helpless non-combat ships.
+*...easy kills of poorly-fitted ships.
+*...any kills of high-value ships that will look good on his killboard.
+*...any chance to banter or smack talk with us.
+*...any enjoyment from the conflict.
--Hong Hu
+Removes redundant sentence start and draws attention to the key point.  Improves reading flow and clarity.