Archive Talk:Wartime Standard Operating Procedures: Difference between revisions

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	*...any enjoyment from the conflict.		*...any enjoyment from the conflict.

	Removes redundant sentence start and draws attention to the key point. Improves reading flow and clarity.		Removes redundant sentence start and draws attention to the key point. Improves reading flow and clarity. --Hong Hu