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 You can read about our [[Classes|recorded classes, syllabi, and other information]] on our classes.
-EVE University has a large [[How_Tos_and_Guides|collection of guides]] on many different subjects.  These guides have been contributed and updated over the years by a wide-range of players.
+Our wiki is well-known source of information for the EVE community, and has a large [[How_Tos_and_Guides|collection of guides]] on many subjects. These guides have been created and updated over the years by a wide-range of players throughout the community.
-We also have a [[Recommended_Curriculum|Recommended Curriculum]] page, where you can find some of the more common classes that should be of interest to most new players.
+We also have a [[Recommended_Curriculum|Recommended Curriculum]] page, where you can find some of the more common classes that should be of interest to many new players.
 And keep an eye on [http://calendar.eveuniversity.org/ our calendar] for upcoming classes.