Archive:Newbie Doctrine: Difference between revisions

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 [[Category:Getting Started]]
 [[Category:Fleets]]
-This is EVE University's Newbie Doctrine, a repertoire of ships that new pilots can use to make valuable contributions to any PvP fleet without any skill training. Fleet Commanders can use it as an add-on to their doctrines, encouraging new pilots to participate in EVE University fleet operations.
+This is EVE University's Newbie Doctrine, a repertoire of ships that empowers new pilots to make valuable contributions to any PvP fleet. Fleet Commanders can use it as an add-on to their doctrines, encouraging new pilots to participate in EVE University fleet operations.
 The Newbie Doctrine program gives free, fully-fitted ships to new members of EVE University.