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 At the same size (25m³) and bandwidth (25Mbit/sec) as heavy drones, sentries are powerful, long range damage dealers. Their immobility and somewhat low tracking speeds makes them most effective against slower, larger targets, and generally they are deployed from battleships or similar combat vessels.
-Although each type of sentry drone does the damage typical of its racial affiliation, the choice of drone to use often has to do with relative damage, range and tracking. These are summarized here, with the detailed numerical data shown next.
+Although each type of sentry drone does the damage typical of its racial affiliation, drone choice often has to do with relative damage, range, and tracking. These are summarized here, with the detailed numerical data shown next.
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