Talk:Lillik's Guide to (relatively) Safe Ice Harvesting

Add comments, suggestions, and complaints here. Lillik eoner (talk) 00:13, 2 June 2014 (UTC)

• The article looks pretty great! About the only suggestion would be a tweak to the overview. Your narrative makes you sound a bit insecure about your authority on the subject which is contradictory to the inforamtion contained on the page. Hope that helps!