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Talk:Breacher Pods

Discussion page of Breacher Pods
Latest comment: 2 July by Evon R'al in topic Page might need some rewording and fixes

Page might need some rewording and fixes

With respect to the original author, but I think the wording and grammar on this page could use some improvement. This would be my first edit on the wiki so I'm just adding this topic to make sure no one disagrees.

If this gets no response in a few days I'll take that as a go-ahead BaseLine (talk) 05:24, 1 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Go ahead, this is a wiki after all. People are supposed to edit if they can improve the article. It is a bit harsh to say but if you can't handle people changing your contribution you should not write on a wiki. Beside that the original author put a stub marker on it, effectively inviting/urging other editors to expand and improve the article.
P.S. the UniWiki largely follows the wikpidia MoS but is less strict about sourcing. It is appreciated to mention sources but not required. UniWiki MoS -- Evon R'all (talk) 09:11, 1 July 2025 (UTC)Reply
Nice job, I see one point of attention "The only launchers currently available are..." uses a relative time reference. Relative time references should be avoided as described in the UniWiki MoS. The relevant artice and section is this one UniWiki:Manual of Style/Words to watch#Relative time references. -- Evon R'all (talk) 06:28, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply