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 == Tutorial Systems in EVE ==
-Setting off on your journey to the career agent, you will likely come from one of these systems and stations, from which new players are spawned to start the tutorial. The system at which you start in is dependent on the corporation you pick when you create the character, for instance, creating a new Minmatar character with a corporation of "Republic Military School" will place you in Ammold.
+After you finish the tutorial, you will spawn in one of the Tutorial systems. The system is dependent on the corporation you pick when you create the character. As an example, creating a new Minmatar character with a corporation of "Republic Military School" will place you in Ammold.
 === Amarr ===