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 Below is a DRAFT.
+"As a profession" is at top but out of alignment with a mechanics page.  If retained, move more toward the bottom.  Start with mechanics.
+Prospecting has good information, but not necessarily in a flow explaining the mechanics of mining - and even internal flow is messy.  Asteroids take center stage before mentioning ice and gas as an afterthought.  This page needs to be more of a general guidestone of ALL mining, with mining type-specific pages linked down.
+Ships section is a good start but needs a scrub.  E.g. - why does prospect not mention gas mining.  Are the descriptions in line since major patch?
+Skills section - good start, reorganize to types of mining (deliniate barge and orca skills for example) and move toward the bottom.
+Implants - either provide a bit more detail, or mention it as a bit of a final note in the skills section.  As an independent section of the table of contents of the page, the section is very lacking.
+Bookmarking section - good info - how up to date?  Specifically asteroid belt mining here.  Does this need to go to an asteroid belt page, or can it be wrapped into a more generic efficiency section?
+BYOC Booster tipping section needs removal
+Initial brainstorming (in work):
+- Mining Intro - blurbs about what is mining
+- Mining types - Asteroid Ore, Moon Ore, Ice, Gas, Special (Mercoxit, etc)
+- Ships
+- Equipment
+- Skills
+- General Efficiency
+- Activities
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