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'''Immediately''' activate the afterburner and make haste towards was changed to '''Immediately''' active the afterburner and make haste towards , the wording feels wrong to me activate was fine as is , other than that the minor edits looked ok i have no experiance with sleeper cache so don't know if accurate or not. | |||
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