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 A recent example of this was when Pandemic Legion, an alliance known for its PvP prowess and experienced players, ventured through a lowsec area with Incursion rats. They were not prepared for it and as such [https://www.pandemic-legion.com/killboard/view_kill.php?id=1082915 lost a 400mil Deimos to sansha gate rats].
-Finally, we are all proud Unistas at the end of the day and we should stick together and help out our fellow bros. This is your chance to get out there and help some newer guys out while at the same time filling in gaps in both their knowledge and your's.
+Finally, we are all proud Unistas and we should work together regardless of campus and help out our fellow bros. This is your chance to get out there and help others while at the same time filling the gaps in your own knowledge.
 ==What The Initiative Can Offer==