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Talk:Planetary Industry at the NSC

Discussion page of Planetary Industry at the NSC
Revision as of 03:04, 30 May 2022 by Thaddeus Kastelanski (talk | contribs) (Opening discussion :))
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Latest comment: 30 May 2022 by Thaddeus Kastelanski in topic A few thoughts

A few thoughts

  • We might consider altering section headings to be informative statements, rather than questions.
  • The article strikes a consistent casual tone and style. While easy to read, this makes certain information hard to convey or follow.
  • Some of the information presented is overly redundant when compared to parent pages or pages dedicated to another PI-related subject.
  • Once we take a brief pass at cleanup, we will be in a better position to make further enhancements to existing content.

Thaddeus Kastelanski (talk) 03:04, 30 May 2022 (UTC)Reply