User talk:Kelduum Revaan/SOP: Difference between revisions

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-== You should not be undocked unless you are...  ==
+== You must not be undocked unless you are both...  ==
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-You don't have to be able to speak, just to listen. <ref>If something happens, you need to be able to communicate it quickly, or at least receive instruction quickly. The few seconds it can take to type something and someone to read it back is often the difference between success and failure.</ref>
+You don't have to be able to speak, just to listen. If something happens, you need to be able to communicate it quickly, or at least receive instruction quickly. The few seconds it can take to type something and someone to read it back is often the difference between saving your ship and losing it.
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