Difference between revisions of "Talk:Planetary Industry at the NSC"
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Revision as of 19:25, 2 June 2022
A few thoughts
- We might consider altering section headings to be informative statements, rather than questions.
- The article strikes a consistent casual tone and style. While easy to read, this makes certain information hard to convey or follow.
- Some of the information presented is overly redundant when compared to parent pages or pages dedicated to another PI-related subject.
- Once we take a brief pass at cleanup, we will be in a better position to make further enhancements to existing content.
Thaddeus Kastelanski (talk) 03:04, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- I'll draw the attention of the current NSC Manager User:Devalt Yotosala to your suggestions and proposals. Arin Mara (talk) 19:24, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
