Talk:Planetary Industry at the NSC

A few thoughts

• We might consider altering section headings to be informative statements, rather than questions.
• The article strikes a consistent casual tone and style. While easy to read, this makes certain information hard to convey or follow.
• Some of the information presented is overly redundant when compared to parent pages or pages dedicated to another PI-related subject.
• Once we take a brief pass at cleanup, we will be in a better position to make further enhancements to existing content.

Thaddeus Kastelanski (talk) 03:04, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

I'll draw the attention of the current NSC Manager User:Devalt Yotosala to your suggestions and proposals. Arin Mara (talk) 19:24, 2 June 2022 (UTC)