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 == Community goals ==
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 From time to time, production department personnel may request help from or offer services to the university-wide community using the ingame chat channels or the forums. Additionally, we use the following EVE University services for communication:
-* Ingame mailing list {{co|slateblue|production.E-UNI}} (current unistas can join freely, ex-unistas needs to ask the [[#Community leaders|community leaders]] for permission).
+* Ingame mailing list {{co|slateblue|production.E-UNI}} (current unistas can join freely, ex-unistas need to ask the [[#Community leaders|community leaders]] for permission).
-* '''Production Department''' [[Slack]] Members of the department will gain access to a dedicated slack channel through the department Manager (see [https://forum.eveuniversity.org/viewtopic.php?f=242&t=105069 this post] for instructions on how to set it up).
+* Members of the department will gain access to a dedicated slack channel through the {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} (see https://wiki.eveuniversity.org/UniSlacks for instructions on how to access EVE University slack channels).
 ==== Requirements ====
-We recognize that Eve University is first and foremost a place of learning. With that in mind, some of the roles in the department can be done with next to no training and minimal skill points. Other industrial jobs require months or even years of dedicated training for both the character and the human player. The following pages provide some general information regarding the deep complexity of industry in Eve Online:
+We recognize that EVE University is first and foremost a place of learning. With that in mind, some of the roles in the department can be done with next to no training and minimal skill points. Other industrial jobs require months or even years of dedicated training for both the character and the human player. The following pages provide some general information regarding the deep complexity of industry in EVE Online:
-* [[Industry]], gives basic information regarding industry and the ingame industry window in Eve Online.
+* [[Industry]], gives basic information regarding industry and the ingame industry window.
 * [[Manufacturing]], explains how to build things.
 * [[Research]], provides instructions for improving blueprint originals in terms of time efficiency and material efficiency. Also describes the procedure for copying blueprint originals to produce blueprint copies, and why a person would want to do this.
-* [[Invention]], takes the reader on a trip down the rabbit hole that produces advanced T2 modules, drones, ammunition, and ships.
+* [[Invention]], takes the reader on a trip down the rabbit hole that is advanced T2 module, drone, ammunition, and ship production.
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 * A long list of 30 different scientific skills required for invention and for the manufacture of advanced modules and ships, from [[Skills:Science#Amarr_Encryption_Methods|Amarr Encryption Methods]] to [[Skills:Science#Yan_Jung_Technology|Yan Jung Technology]].
-It should be noted that most of the above skills rely on attributes of Intelligence and Memory, for those students who are familiar with neural remapping ([[Skills_and_learning#Neural_Remaps]])
+It should be noted that most of the above skills rely on attributes of Intelligence and Memory, for those students who are familiar with [[Skills_and_learning#Neural_Remaps|Neural Remaps]].
 == Community leaders ==
-We have an {{co|slateblue|Assistant Manager}} and {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} to help ensure that EVE University's production needs are met. If you have any questions or looking to give feedback or suggestions that you think could be helpful, don't hesitate to contact us. We are also the people you turn to if you have any concerns about the department or have an issue with any of its members.
+The Production Department is typically run by an {{co|slateblue|Assistant Manager}} and a {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} to help ensure that EVE University's production needs are met. If you have any questions, feedback, or suggestions please contact us.
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-The '''Assistant Manager''' answers to the '''Production Manager''', who in turn answers to the [[Management#Director_of_Logistics|Director of Logistics]]. General complaints about the behaviour of EVE University members can also go through the [[Student Advocate]].
+The '''Assistant Manager''' answers to the '''Production Manager''', who in turn answers to the [[Management#Director_of_Logistics|Director of Logistics]]. General complaints about the behaviour of EVE University members should be routed through the [[Student Advocate]].
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