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 From time to time, production department personnel may request help from or offer services to the university-wide community using the ingame chat channels or the forums. Additionally, we use the following EVE University services for communication:
-* Ingame mailing list {{co|slateblue|production.E-UNI}} (current unistas can join freely, ex-unistas needs to ask the [[#Community leaders|community leaders]] for permission).
+* Ingame mailing list {{co|slateblue|production.E-UNI}} (current unistas can join freely, ex-unistas need to ask the [[#Community leaders|community leaders]] for permission).
-* '''Production Department''' - [[Slack]] Members of the department will gain access to a dedicated slack channel through the {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} (see https://wiki.eveuniversity.org/UniSlacks for instructions on how to access EVE University slack channels).
+* Members of the department will gain access to a dedicated slack channel through the {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} (see https://wiki.eveuniversity.org/UniSlacks for instructions on how to access EVE University slack channels).
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 * A long list of 30 different scientific skills required for invention and for the manufacture of advanced modules and ships, from [[Skills:Science#Amarr_Encryption_Methods|Amarr Encryption Methods]] to [[Skills:Science#Yan_Jung_Technology|Yan Jung Technology]].
-It should be noted that most of the above skills rely on attributes of Intelligence and Memory, for those students who are familiar with neural remapping ([[Skills_and_learning#Neural_Remaps]])
+It should be noted that most of the above skills rely on attributes of Intelligence and Memory, for those students who are familiar with [[Skills_and_learning#Neural_Remaps|Neural Remaps]].
 == Community leaders ==
-We have an {{co|slateblue|Assistant Manager}} and {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} to help ensure that EVE University's production needs are met. If you have any questions or looking to give feedback or suggestions that you think could be helpful, don't hesitate to contact us. We are also the people you turn to if you have any concerns about the department or have an issue with any of its members.
+The Production Department is typically run by an {{co|slateblue|Assistant Manager}} and a {{co|slateblue|Production Manager}} to help ensure that EVE University's production needs are met. If you have any questions, feedback, or suggestions please contact us.
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-The '''Assistant Manager''' answers to the '''Production Manager''', who in turn answers to the [[Management#Director_of_Logistics|Director of Logistics]]. General complaints about the behaviour of EVE University members can also go through the [[Student Advocate]].
+The '''Assistant Manager''' answers to the '''Production Manager''', who in turn answers to the [[Management#Director_of_Logistics|Director of Logistics]]. General complaints about the behaviour of EVE University members should be routed through the [[Student Advocate]].
 [[Category:EVE University Incursion Community]]