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| + | The edit to the eve mon section specifically to the set up character would of been a good chance to put a numbered step by step for easy digestion, the page is improved but could do with a little more step by step hand holding as its helping to setup something. |
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| + | I downloaded eve mon and followed the guide took me 2 attempts to follow as i lost my place in the reading hence why i think numbered step by step might be better. |
| + | still very good edits |
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| + | The addition of some fits is a nice little touch to the scanning alt page, but 3 of the 4 fits dont import fully ingame , Rangefinding Array I for example is not able to be simulated for me. |
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| + | as i am unable to import 3 of the 4 fits fully i shall down vote this one |
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| + | its alot to digest but if the information in the buyback sandbox example is acurate id say very good job and is of benifit, that took awhile to do for sure |
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| + | way to many edits for any sane person to go over fully but the random ones i did look at seemed ok and imrpoved the apearance along the way some miner edits also |
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| + | minor edit of dragoon page |
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| + | Contacts page - while updateing images to reflect what is current is an improvment visually the page is worse in my opinion, if the images where of similar size and location to the originals id award top marks but for moment i think it went backwords visually sorry |
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| + | '''Immediately''' activate the afterburner and make haste towards was changed to '''Immediately''' active the afterburner and make haste towards , the wording feels wrong to me activate was fine as is , other than that the minor edits looked ok i have no experiance with sleeper cache so don't know if accurate or not. |
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| + | Lots of good little spelling and grammer fix's, but armor was changed a number of times to armour while both spellings are correct armor is the spelling used ingame and should be what we use as its more relevent to the game imo |
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| + | Lots of little additions nothing jumped out at me negativly , overall not bad and i do like reading a wiki page where the layout doesn't magically change for no reason so good imo |
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| + | Liked the addition of where to find blue prints for a number of the ships but i liked the Corruption and Suppression additional info the most for these edits |
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| + | I think ping <proper Uni role for refreshing UFC contracts> is too generic of a change from what it was cause it does not give any clue who to actually contact even role wise. |
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| + | but other than who to ping for more contracts the page is really good the recent improvements are indeed majestic, also im totally biosed cause i love events and i used to host this in the past also |
| + | long live fight club |
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| + | good contribution a new page about a shinie npc who needs to die and a very good start to the page indeed , would love to see a picture of it added to the page but layout of page looks pleasent |
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| + | probe scanner icons at the bottom of page look nice and in a perdie box |
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| + | good improvements, added suitable sized images, restructred the layour like setup overview is now b4 things like shortcuts and there was a bunch of not needed text at the start thats been moved away , all in all good improvements |
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| + | yeah the removel of two lines is probably fine, would say that i feel not enough to be considered for taking part in the wiki event. |
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| + | I think the removel of the skills section from the character sheet could be argued either way could argue it is better somewhere else could argue its fine where it was, while the skills page is not fully on the charcter sheet there is still a button on the character sheet to navigate to the skills page and the info that was removed was well presented in an easy to digest box , |
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| + | tldr i prefered it as it was sorry |
| + | that said in adition to the removed skills section it does require new images and a little tlc if it was to be kept |
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| + | Dang thats alot of edits, im not going threw all that can i just say good job and ty for all your edits :D |
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| + | Looks good apearance wise, i lack data/relic knowledge to know if correct but it is a visually pleaseing imrovement |
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| + | indeed its improved i did like the addition of the misstion breif |
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| + | excellent formating this is my favourite so far |
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| + | Not enough to be considered for wiki event IMO |
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| + | nothing major nice little bits here and there |
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| + | nice little edits here and there |
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| + | Bulk of the addition to the page is just a copy paste from another page, still decent addition but just copy paste job |
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| + | Nothing of value was added only a suggestion of what should be added, if the suggestion had of been implemented by the submistion id say very good addition sadly its lacking |
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| + | Very good additions , i especially liked the ship/skin scam that was added |
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| + | also added the full pages for a gecko not just editing an exsisting page put up a new page and it looks tidy |
| + | good job |
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