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 = Travel Advisories =
-Travel Advisorys may be declared by an [http://forum.eveuniversity.org/ilnofficers ILN Officer] or member of [[EVE University Management|Management]], and are typically limited to a specific system or region containing hostile activity.
+Travel Advisorys may be declared by an [http://forum.eveuniversity.org/ilnofficers ILN Officer] or member of [[EVE University Management|Management]], and are typically limited to a specific system or region likely to contain hostile activity.
-These mean any non-combat activity is prohibited and all pilots must be docked unless in a combat fleet and under orders to be undocked by their FC. Travel into or out of the advisory area, must be done by Fast Frigate, Shuttle, Starter Frigate or [[Jump Clones|clone jump]].
+An advisory means that any non-combat activity is prohibited and all pilots must be docked unless they are in a combat fleet and under orders to be undocked by their Fleet Commander. Travel into or out of the advisory area must be done by [[Frigate#Fast Frigates|Fast Frigate]], [[Frigate#Shuttles|Shuttle]], Starter Frigate or [[Jump Clones|clone jump]].
 Once the threat has passed, the Travel Advisory may only be lifted by an [http://forum.eveuniversity.org/ilnofficers ILN Officer] or [[EVE University Management|Management]].