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| + | Minor edit highlighting the salvaging capability of Dragoon in PVE, however non descriptive edit summary. |
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| + | Small informative update, which was extensively discussed on forum and discord. Use of user namespace, with mix of descriptive and non descriptive edit summaries. |
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| + | Spelling correction and proofreading of a long wiki page. Edit summary is informative. |
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| + | Created new page with good information. Could be improved with some links and refrences. |
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| + | * Upload new versions of images |
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| + | * Remove outdated information |
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| + | * Has taken on a project |
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| + | * Created article |
| + | * Update article |
| + | * Correct error |
| + | * Rework redirect to article |
| + | * update template |
| + | * Create new images |
| + | * Update Images |
| + | * Use of Edit summary |
| + | * Use of file upload comment |
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| + | * Added a column about site PvE safety to the tables. As the content of the cells is identical for all sites, regardless of security level I do not believe that this is the best solution for adding that information. Also the safety information is on the “Is this site "safe" to warp to?” of the [[Relic and data sites]] article creating multiple sources of the same information. |
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| + | * This edit seems to be triggered by the update banner added by [[User:Vatrin|Vatrin]] |
| + | * use of Edit summary |
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| + | Small but informative and beautiful edit. Edit and edit summary inspired by the update banner. |
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| + | * Added content as ‘requested’ by the update banner |
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| + | * use of {{Tl|verify}} template for information the editor was not sure of. |
| + | * Remove and re-add (with Verifiy tag) Suriage EWAR. Good solution for when in doubt. |
| + | * Use of Edit summary |
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| + | Note about edit summary 22:05: According to [[NPC naming conventions]] the Taibu prefix indicates Elite. Also the description on [https://everef.net/type/25034 EVERef] identifies it as elite frigate. EVE Ref also has a Warp Disruption Range for the Suriage |
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| + | * Working (With Chris?) in Chris Halsky’ draft space |
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| + | * Published the work to the Main namespace. |
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| + | * Would like to see a bit more consistent use of the Edit summary |
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| + | * Added information to existing article |
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| + | * Use Edit summary |
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| + | * Added category to the editors file uploads. |
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| + | Unfortunately [[Flight Deck]] and [[Twitch Streaming Guide]] are categorized as EVE University and are thus not eligible for the contest. I do think however that the twitch guide could be differently categorized as only part of the information is E-UNI specific. |
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| + | * Mostly proofreading, but that is important to. |
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| + | Note about Angel Repurposed Outpost: Editor changed rare drop from Dramiel to Daredevil BPC, might it be that both have a chance of dropping? |
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| + | * Expand short ship descriptions from single word place holder to paragraph |
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| + | * Could improve the use of Edit summary |
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| + | Minor informative edit. Text was copied from other pages without change or paraphrasing to suite the topic. Edit summary could be more descriptive. |
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| + | * Added {{Tl|Update}} template |
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| + | * Created user page |
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| + | Not the best use of Edit summary. It should describe what (technically) is being done. The summary of the editors user page describes what it is. |
| + | Possible “better” summaries could be: |
| + | * [[User:Vatrin]] – Create user page |
| + | * [[List of data and relic sites]] – Add {{T|Update}} |
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| + | * updated [[Capital Ship Modules]] |
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| + | * Created article about the Gecko. Whether the Gecko deserves its own article I don’t know but I do think that use of the {{Tl|ShipArticle}} template is not appropriate. |
| + | * Added/expanded summary, tactics and skill sections on several ship articles |
| + | * Added a “new” scam and did some proofreading on [[Scams in EVE Online]] |
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| + | * Could do with some more use of the “Show preview” option. |
| + | * Should make use of the Edit summary |
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