User:Evon R'al/Draft: Difference between revisions

Line 2:

{{Hatnote|See [[EVE University Management]] for other Directorates.}}

[[EVE University]] '''Diplomacy Directorate''''s ~~main task~~ is to ~~help uphold EVE University~~'s ~~neutral status and high level of~~ reputation ~~within~~ EVE. The Directorate manages standings for Ivy League and acts as a point of contact for ~~Uni members~~ to ~~report~~ diplomatic incidents ~~for further investigation and resolution~~. The ~~Diplomacy~~ Directorate also ~~receives contact from organizations outside~~ of Ivy League ~~who have questions about standings or wish to report any diplomatic incidents involving~~ University ~~members~~.

[[EVE University]] '''Diplomacy Directorate''''s mandate is to preserve the corporation's reputation amonght the EVE Online community and uphold it's [[neutrality]]. The Directorate manages relationships and standings for the [[Ivy League Alliance]], and acts as primary point of contact for diplomatic communications. Diplomats are responsible to receive, investigate and seek resolution for diplomatic incidents involving EVE University members. The Directorate is also responisblew for the adminsitration of the Ivy League Alts Alliance and [[EVE University Hall of Residence]].

~~The Diplomacy Directorate will liaise with alliances that have declared war, to establish intent and seek mutually beneficial content.~~

== Staff ==

@@ Line 2: / Line 2: @@
 {{Hatnote|See [[EVE University Management]] for other Directorates.}}
-[[EVE University]] '''Diplomacy Directorate''''s main task is to help uphold EVE University's neutral status and high level of reputation within EVE. The Directorate manages standings for Ivy League and acts as a point of contact for Uni members<!-- Only Uni members or also incoming? Oops, next sentence talks about this. maybe some rephrasing needed?--> to report diplomatic incidents for further investigation and resolution. The Diplomacy Directorate also receives contact from organizations outside of Ivy League who have questions about standings or wish to report any diplomatic incidents involving University members.
+[[EVE University]] '''Diplomacy Directorate''''s mandate is to preserve the corporation's reputation amonght the EVE Online community and uphold it's [[neutrality]]. The Directorate manages relationships and standings for the [[Ivy League Alliance]], and acts as primary point of contact for diplomatic communications. Diplomats are responsible to receive, investigate and seek resolution for diplomatic incidents involving EVE University members. The Directorate is also responisblew for the adminsitration of the Ivy League Alts Alliance and [[EVE University Hall of Residence]].
-The Diplomacy Directorate will liaise with alliances<!-- and corporations? --> that have declared war, to establish intent and seek mutually beneficial content.
 == Staff ==